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Icarus :iconthedoorwithin:TheDoorWithin 10 14 Smol Birdchild :iconthedoorwithin:TheDoorWithin 12 24 Miraculous Kingdom of RWBY :iconthedoorwithin:TheDoorWithin 9 25 Kingdom Hearts Grad Cap :iconthedoorwithin:TheDoorWithin 13 12
You say I wish you were here
like there's something left for those groping words to tackle
to the scratchy carpet, who's color is a wisp of cigarette smoke in a shattered memory-
in the living room,
like we used to.
But you're only speaking to a void
permanently the color of a bruise when it's fresh,
your own voice drifting back in a smoldering echo of  ashes-
Nagging, Here, here, here.
And what you'll never realize is that
you have no one else in the world to blame for this-
No one but the person in the mirror smudged with shadows of black dye and eclipses of hair gel,
(The stuff you rub in when your fingers are stuffed stiff with shavings from the drumsticks),
The person who your eldest calls
Only because she doesn't know what else to call you
But who doesn't even believe herself when her lips sample the label for the hundredth, thousandth, millionth time and try to figure out just how it tastes,
if she wants to risk suffocating by trying to suck it down.
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Please Don't Take My Sunshine Away... :iconthedoorwithin:TheDoorWithin 7 21
Miraculous LadyBluff: In the Rain
      Aleric Gunnar hadn't wanted his first day at a school that wasn't built for special operatives to go like this. In his head, he'd played it out a million ways, a trillion times, until he was certain he'd exhausted every scenario and all of their twice removed, thrice removed, yes- even 87th removed cousins. Ideally, it would've gone something more like how he'd imagined. Ideally.
     He'd walk into the classroom with a proud profile, chin just high enough to air confidence, but juxtaposed close enough to the earth to dismantle vanity. That way, the boys wouldn't perceive his prominent muscles as a challenge. His books would be lovingly swaddled in both arms rather than tucked under one, gifting him the appearance of a tender young man who knew not just how to wreak havoc, but how to satiate it with serenity. And that way, the girls wouldn't view him as a vagrant. His tattoos wouldn't provoke questions. They'd be smoothed over with the
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     Beneath the body of scrap metal that might have once been a vehicle, Farrah picked and plucked at wires, her feet sticking out and crossed at the ankles as if this position were for lounging and not for working. She had a way of making everything look so effortless. If she had just a pinky finger on each hand, Kai was certain she could still make even the tundra of life into a warm breeze. He could hear her low humming as it buzzed against the metal. Against the cement walls-tumbling and cascading over the shelves like waterfalls cast in cream. And of course, rolling across his skin. It lathered goosebumps roughly across him, and before he knew it his pulse had doubled until the tiny bottle strung on his chest began to dance along with his swaying head. He swept a heavily scarred palm around it and scrunched.
     "This is nice," he started, leaning back on his palms and digging his bare fingers into the concrete. It cast a shiver down his spin
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Slice of Life
Farrah knew that Kai was good on his board, but today, he was practically grinding the ground into debris. The wheels were rough and scratched against the pavement. Every few moments, the tip of his neon pink sneaker dipped to the street and propelled him forward. Even when he bumped against a rock or shot across a crack in the sidewalk, his body stayed fluid, leaning with the flow, but simultaneously making sure he- not his board- was always the one directing it. She watched, arms crossed over her chest, smirk flipped on her warm cheeks. Thoroughly amused.
He soared up the ramp with a thundering crackle. He skirted the top, snatched the end of his board with gloved fingers, and expertly balanced himself in the air with it before falling seamlessly back down onto the deck. As if it were nothing, he rolled away with his hands tucked in the pockets of his equally vibrant hoodie. Left dimple glowing, deep blue eyes sizzling with delight in the misty chill of the afternoon. She watched him
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Somebody to Die For :iconthedoorwithin:TheDoorWithin 12 9
Not Awkward at All
Tanvi had been working on her homework when she heard the knock.
Before the knock, she had tried to ignore the constant scuffling on the carpet outside her door. Quick shuffles and abrupt thuds, copious amounts of agitated mumbling. Without even feeling his presence, she knew Vin was pacing outside. It wouldn't have been the first time he pulled something like this. Whenever he needed to talk about something that really bothered him, he always wrestled himself to the dirt trying to figure out how exactly to say it. That was just how he was.
Afraid to say something wrong.
Afraid to articulate any true and honest feelings.
Afraid of being used, as if he were not a human being, but a tool.
Having known him for so long, the sounds amused Tanvi more than anything, but they also puffed excited bouts of bubbles into her stomach. What was he here for? The anticipation of it had caused her ears to constantly twitch and flinch, acting like frisky foxes prancing around in a fresh snow. Homework w
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Icarus and His Sun
Where the flaming tongues of her hair caressed his skin, his flesh became liquid, dripping and sliding from his bones. Malleable. Pliable. Haunted with whimsy, vibrating with a delightful ecstasy that made his lungs as barren and as hungry as a desert. Had there been a time when they- when he- was solid? He almost couldn't recall. Her very presence muddied his mind, pulling him deep into an abyss of pure light.
Where she was warm.
Where she was serene.
Where she was nothing but elation and acceptance.
But for all its glory, it was the one place...
...where he wasn't safe.
He knew he wasn't safe.
And deep inside, he suspected she did, too.
But there was nothing he would rather have than this.
Holding the curves of her face in his hands. Resting her head in his lap. Playing and tempting her lips, softly first, and then passionately, until she burned so bright he could hardly see or think. He could only feel, and try to preserve and tuck the precious sensation
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Sleeping at Last
48 hours ago, Vaelen had watched Dillon slip through the sterile white door leading to his private lab. His face had been primarily vacant as always, but it wasn't without undertones, and she saw frustration etched in the slight curl of his brow. The subtle jostle of his throat. The twitch in his jaw when she asked him what he was doing. Whether that was because he was starting to open his reclusive heart to her, or because she was simply becoming more attuned to his mannerisms, she didn't know. Maybe it was a combination of both- even if she really hoped it was more the former than the latter. Any progress in deciphering him, no matter how small, gave her a dose of accomplishment nothing else seemed to be able to offer.
24 hours ago, she had seen him depart the room. She had expected him to head to the dining hall- perhaps for a bite to eat, a snack to satiate the hunger that must have been gnawing his stomach to shambles. But he hadn't. At the diverging corner, he had brushed past a
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Seeing Shadows
Chance sat alone.
Complacent and quiet as the hush of the sunset on a winter's night, his back pressed loosely against the wall, his fingers looped together and constantly fiddling with each other.  Except- they jumbled in slow motion. Like every joint, every bit of cartilage was replaced with taffy. In the distance, he heard the tempting lull of music as it billowed through the halls. More likely than not, it came from Vaelen's room, three doors down. She never really slept, he discovered quickly- suffering from years of insomnia, but hiding it well beneath a composed and diplomatic manner that was only broken by blushes. He understood that. Mostly. Not so much the hiding it so well part. If he was capable of such a feat, then maybe he wouldn't wade through the heated waters of scattered wishes so often.
The vacant room carried only an unobtrusive lamplight. A few worn and cracking couches, a table nestled comfortably between them, Kai's sketchbook and Dillon's research notes sca
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Let Me Go :iconthedoorwithin:TheDoorWithin 13 39
Making Memories
It began as a crackle of static. Somewhere inside the drowsy frosting coating him in sleep, it tickled Miles' nose, feathery and light and leaving his smooth breathing unperturbed. The night was quiet, but not in an uncanny way; the familiar creaks and winds more than filled it. In his arms, bundled up with her back against his heavily scarred chest, was Tricia, the woman he couldn't be more proud to call his wife. Some of her raven locks wove through the sheets and ran over her shoulders, others of them lounging lazily against her back and the soft pillow they shared. A significant patch of it was pressed against Miles' lips. It was a promise- to kiss her tenderly, to never leave again, even in her dreams.
The crackle squeaked. It stammered, then popped. A moan blipped into a broken cry.
"Mmm," Tricia murmured. She twisted, her vibrant green eyes refusing to open and give up on sleep, even if the moon would not disturb her. "Is that..."
Another cry tapped along the blue edges of wallp
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Aspiring Author~Cosplayer~Artist~Christian

Author Alias: Prescient_Rain

Hello, mates! :D
The name's Hannah, and I'm a freshman in college pursuing a degree in creative writing! I've been telling stories since I was...well, can't even say for sure, it's been so long xD I started seriously looking at writing as something I wanted to do for the rest of my life at about age 12-13. Since then, I haven't changed my mind, and as of right now, my attention is focused on a fantasy novel series temporarily dubbed "Bluff". When I'm not writing, I'm either plotting what devious thing I'll do to my characters next, drawing, or cosplaying- which I've been doing since 2012. My favorite thing so far about the writing process is definitely watching the unique and unexpected developments between character relationships- sometimes ones that you never intended for. If you ever have any questions about my work, would like me to take a look at your own, or perhaps just want to talk about writing and its gloriousness- just let me know! As long as it isn't super time-consuming, I'd be happy to give your work a read and a critique, and I love to roleplay and learn about others' OC's as well :D

Thanks so much for stopping by!

Amazing artworks done of my characters! Please check the artists out!

Vin Commission by kat-ahdara for TheDoorWithin by kathryngee Request 2 by coralpinkflorescent
Felix Taras Vance "Vin", Miles Illias and Tricia Mazzetti <3

Current Projects:



Pandora's Box

Earth 2 RP with :icongodsguardianangel2:

Finished Cosplays:

~Chat Noir (Miraculous Ladybug)
~Ruby Rose (RWBY)
~Jude Mathis (Tales of Xillia)
~Robin (Young Justice)
~Sora (KH DDD)
~Nagisa and Haru (Free! Iwatobi Swim Club)
~Percy Jackson (PJO)
~Hiccup (HtTyD 1)
~Jack Frost (RotG, w/o staff)
~Roxas (KH2)
~Roxas (KH Days)
~Magical Girl Serah Farron (FF XIII-2)
~Halloween Town Roxas (KH)
~Zelda Skyloft Version (LoZ SS)
~Zelda Goddess/Hylia (LoZ SS)
~Weiss Schnee (RWBY- Beacon Uniform Ver.)
~Alice (Alice in Wonderland)

Cons I have attended:
-Toracon 2012
-Matsuricon 2012
-Toracon 2013
-UBCon 2013
-Ryukon 2013
-Matsuricon 2013
-Toracon 2014
-Otakon 2014
-UBCon 2015
-Matsuricon 2015
-Toracon 2016
-Matsuricon 2016

A quick statement. I will not indulge in yaoi, yuri, or anything that promotes the LGBT community. I am not a bigot. I am not a homophobe. I will also not indulge in anything NSFW. I have my own set of beliefs and my reasons for holding them. Please respect that as you would wish to be respected. Thank you.
Okay. This one...little...thing about Miraculous has been seriously driving me crazy- mostly because I feel that there is so much evidence pointing to the fact that this theory IS correct, but there are a few hiccups that throw it off. 
So, I'm going to break it down the best that I can. From there, if you have a theory towards or against it, and can successfully debunk the other side, please do comment! Let's try to figure this out! 

Points that lead us to believe Gabriel IS Hawkmoth

-In the origins episode, we see a silhouette of what is confirmed to be Hawkmoth, and it looks strikingly like Gabriel in body type, outfit choice, and yes- jaw shape. The silhouette of Hawkmoth doesn't even look like Hawkmoth. Does this eliminate the jaw evidence? 
-Hawkmoth has a picture of Adrien's mother, which may be his motivation for gathering the miraculous'. Since Adrien's mother disappeared, this could make sense. 
-Gabriel has the miraculous book in his safe, along with the actual peacock miraculous, next to a picture of Adrien's mother and a plane ticket(?). Why would he just have that? It seems too big of a coincidence. 
-Hawkmoth and Gabriel both have the same wedding ring. 
-In Jackady, before going through with his plan, Hawkmoth announces that "it's risky". Why would it be risky? Perhaps it's worth the risk because he can be around Ladybug and Chat Noir in his civilian form. 
      -In the same episode, Gabriel is very uncannily interested in Ladybug's earrings. Yes, he's a fashion designer, but...
      -He also takes the time to observe Adrien's ring as Chat, and then later during their hug, when he is de-transformed. The look on his face is shocked- maybe even a little alarmed? (If he realizes Chat is his son, and he himself is Hawkmoth, what does he do now?)
-Gabriel is almost never around. Yes, he is a fashion designer, but what if part of the reason is also because he's off being EVILLLL?
-Hawkmoth has a dramatic flair that would easily align with mannerisms a fashion designer would stereotypically exercise- especially when unrestrained by societal regulations and his reputation. Think of how Adrien acts when he's Chat Noir. Less reserved. 
-Hawkmoth's lair is apparently a large room with a frankly beautiful window. Something like this could likely only be afforded by someone with a lot of money, and if it is somewhere in the Agreste mansion (possibly even hidden, as we've seen it open and close), Adrien would have no real reason to suspect it.  
-Both have the same body structure, as well as the same eye color. 
-Hawkmoth and Gabriel have the same voice actor with little variation between the two, besides depth. Shows do occasionally use the same VA's for different people, but the fact that it just so happens to be Gabriel and Hawkmoth seems too "right on" to discount. 
-In a post on Twitter, Adrien's Spanish voice actor announced a Happy Father's Day to Papillon, ending the post with " mi padre", or "he is my father." Which is probably the most solid proof the fandom has, I mean, cmon. 
-On the French Wikipedia, it said that Hawkmoth's identity was to be revealed in Episode 26. If that's truly the case, then this debate is over. 

If I'm missing anything else, please remind me!

Points that lead us to believe Gabriel is NOT Hawkmoth (I have less of these, so please fill me in!)

-Gabriel and Hawkmoth apparently have different jaw shapes. Unless the cowl obscures it somehow to throw us off, this doesn't make sense. 
-In Jackady, Gabriel would've had to do a lot of quick changing to keep up. He also almost leapt to his death. However, out of transformation, he may have had no power over the akuma- he did call this a risk. 
-Where the heck is his lair? If Gabriel is Hawkmoth, how come Adrien hasn't seen it? 
-Gabriel wears glasses. How does he see if he's Hawkmoth? 
-This seems almost too obvious. 

From what I can gather, I'm leaning towards he is Hawkmoth. What're your thoughts?

Also shout out to my main kittens over at Chat's Boot-ay~ 
  • Listening to: In the Rain~ Miraculous Ladybug
  • Reading: You Don't Know Me by Ferisae (sobs)
  • Watching: Miraculous Ladybug
  • Playing: With my phone
  • Eating: Camembert
  • Drinking: Milk


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*spoiler alert*

Such a fitting end for him. He's spent all this time watching those he loves die while he has to carry on. For once, he was allowed the blessing of dying first, and in the arms of someone who truly loved him and showed him how it felt to have a family. 
*warning rant flee now if you don't wanna get political* 

*Really, I mean it. Go if you don't think you can handle it*

Recently, Disney announced that LeFou, in the new Beauty and the Beast movie, will have an "exclusively gay" scene. 
And I am so, so disappointed. 
1- Why are they changing the original, already established Disney character, whose role is to be Gaston's sidekick, and really plays no significance in the movie aside from that classic role? There is no reason to change what already is, just as there was no reason to make Belle the inventor instead of her father in the name of feminism. (Belle was already ostracized and looked down on for her affinity for literature. It really doesn't make sense that she'd be able to maintain face as an inventor in that time period, and doing this also negates Maurice's role, turning him into yet another product of feminism's "stomp on men to make way for the women" trend). 
2- Where in this movie does it make sense for LeFou to have a gay scene? He's not a main character, no one really cares about his subplot- it's about Beauty and the Beast, and the villain, Gaston. LeFou is the sidekick. He's not supposed to have a romance- he's there to play into the background. I understand what they were trying to do with the change, but it doesn't fit; it doesn't make SENSE. 
3- Even members of the LGBT community are upset about this. LeFou is a villain, and aren't they seeking to break those kinds of stereotypes towards homosexual people? Disney's just filling them in. 

I wouldn't have as much of a problem with this if Disney hadn't already
1- butchered Maleficent with feminism (and you can't tell me that movie wasn't feminist, because every single man, aside from the crow who wasn't really a man, turned out to be utterly useless or a raving lunatic),
or if they
2- chose to make an entirely new character in a new movie to avoid SCREWING WITH THE ORIGINAL CHARACTERS, which has been a huge problem. Don't take someone who's already established and do that (the same goes for changing anything essential about a character- people were very unhappy when Cap was suddenly saying "Hail Hydra" for example). It's disrespectful. Not everyone in today's day and age is in support of LGBT, and people should really be given a choice as to whether or not they have to see it (just as anyone should, for anything they might disagree with). Point is- you shouldn't be taking an already established platform and cater like that with those changes. You're forcing people who fell in love with your franchise or your series to either watch something they don't want to (which I won't be doing) or to leave it behind, lest they go against their beliefs, and in that way isolating much of your audience. It all could've been rectified with the placement of an LGBT character in an entirely new movie (which I personally would not choose to watch, but that doesn't matter, because I wouldn't have been invested and displaced from it). 

Great job, Disney. 

*disclaimer: I do not hate members of the LGBT community and make no judgement on them as people, but I do not support their lifestyles. 
I read The Little Prince for the first time today and my life is wrecked 
Yesterday's inauguration gives me so much hope. Trump is by no means a perfect man, nor the ideal choice. However, when he began his inaugural speech- the moment he began the speech- the skies split and rain came down. Many people took this as a negative sign, claiming the sky or Mother Nature is weeping for the country. 
But what is rain? What does rain do? Rain, for years and years and years, has been responsible for nurturing crops, refilling lakes and rivers, and bringing the capacity for life to our world. 
It is not a negative sign, but a positive one. As Pastor Graham said, in the Bible, rain is a sign of God's blessing. And with that innate timing, the whole world watching, I just can't blame it on coincidence. 
Trump is in office for a reason. It's time to stop protesting him, which only creates further divisions and unrest, and do our best to guide him as our nation's executive. 



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Thank you for all of them in return! <3
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